India 1997: Cochin
Thankfully there is no tape damage in this two minute clip. Excerpted from the original 80-minute edit on VHS tape, the viewer is introduced to the beauty of Cochin, India.
The scenery is nice, with a little humor as we are surprised by the name of a neighborhood called "Jew Town". Pleasant enough, but this is just a slideshow of unmotivated moving pictures. I think we could do better if edited today, using some of our previously discussed editing tricks.
Lessons Learned:
You included this scene for a reason, make sure the viewer understands your motivation.
Suggestion:
It needs to be part of a story.
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